SFD Process and meeting with Matt..

I wrote the sfd on my own personal narrative. It was primarily about my relationship with my grandmother, and I spent a couple of days writing it. I met with Matt at the sweet shop to talk about my sfd. I read aloud my entire draft and received extremely helpful feedback from Matt. The main thing he told me to work on was moving away from the essay format that my draft was in and changing to a narrative format. He explained to me that it was crucial to make sure the writing was a story that captivated the reader.